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Shaun.

Shaun.


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PostSubject: My Application.   My Application. EmptyMon May 25, 2009 12:57 pm

Habbo Name:
BreakFist (<33)
Character Name:
Daken
Why you should be picked for_______:
First of all, I can say I am an above average roleplayer. I have extreme capabilities handling this character. I have complete comtrol of my actions as well. Not only could I create good scenes and play a good role in the character, but I can keep a positive infleuence throughout the Rpg. I think this character is a good start for a very good roleplayer, like me.
Other important information:
I have handled important characters throughout other x-men rpgs. I have handled other responsibilities such as teaching in Rpgs. I know I have a very great responsibility if I get the character. I am also very active.
Any background information you have on the character:
Nobody knows the characters last name. He is the son of Wolverine. Not only that, but he has been known as ' Dark Wolverine.' He has tattoos along his left arm and chest. He is also the son of Itsu. Having the same powers has Wolverine, healing, bone claws, and enhanced hand to hand combat, this character is just like his father.



How would I rp this character:
-I then walk by a gorup of men-
-as they question my presence-
-I roar very loud to them-
-as they run to me-
-I move to him fast like now-
-slamming my fist to ones stomach-
-rams out my claws well-
-having him fall in pain-
-as i throw him aside-
-ramming him into one guy here-
-running up to another man-
-holding him infront of me-
-as i send my claw aside his neck-
-having it tear aside it well-
-sliding in his throa-t
-letting hmi fall from pnai-
-i then look to the last man-
(He has a bat, and has great weight)
-as he swings the bat now-
-as i roll under him-
-i leap and get on his back-
-i rapidly punch his back well now-
-slamming out my clas while so-
-as it teras in the abck so well-
-having him fall with a bloody bacj-
-I smirk well to this now-
-sliding my claws in well, walking off-


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Xzaero

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Join date : 2009-05-24
Location : Florida

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PostSubject: Re: My Application.   My Application. EmptyMon May 25, 2009 1:00 pm

Alright, I don't mean to nitpick or go on a tyrade but; Why does every one RP with 'As I' ? An Rp is supposed to be a fluid narration of a characters actions as done by the character with it's responses to other narrations. When you say "As I pull my claws out" "As I stab him" it breaks tide and lets people know that this isn't rp. It should be along the lines of "I slide my claws out " "With my claws extended I dart in and stab at him with my claws" that way it seems more like a story and can paint the picture in the users mind.

I can't stand RP like that but the bio needs to use the template.
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Shaun.

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PostSubject: Re: My Application.   My Application. EmptyMon May 25, 2009 1:01 pm

And you know what?
I'll keep that and mind,
From now on, I think that is my new strategy
<33
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Xzaero

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PostSubject: Re: My Application.   My Application. EmptyMon May 25, 2009 1:02 pm

thank you for responding positively. Rereading the reply made me seem a little harsh. But there is a strict template you have to follow to do this application.
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Shaun.

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PostSubject: Re: My Application.   My Application. EmptyMon May 25, 2009 1:06 pm

I'm going to change it,
Just to see how it looks.
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Juan.

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Join date : 2009-05-24
Age : 30
Location : Orlando, Florida.

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PostSubject: Foreal..   My Application. EmptyMon May 25, 2009 1:23 pm

Even I do that LOL
Suspect
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Austin
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Join date : 2009-05-22
Age : 31
Location : Hillsboro, Oregon

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PostSubject: Re: My Application.   My Application. EmptyMon May 25, 2009 1:24 pm

Application Accepted.
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